I was impressed with the poems that you produced based on our theme, Mountains.
Here are the two poems you voted to have placed on our blog.
The first is by Gabby and the second is by Nicholas.
Well done Gabby and Nicholas. Great to see you using a variety of poetry techniques.
Miss McLaughlin
Blue Mountains
By Gabby Pamandanan
I love the scenery of mountains
Far more then calm seas,
Her majestic blue horizon
Are far greater than these
Her snow white capped peaks
And her ragged edge,
The sun shining dimly
As the birds began to flee
The soft blue light
Dazzling in the sky
Where heaven touches the earth
Is the place where my heart lies
When the wind begins to blow
The mountain song gas begun,
As we stand as a generation
The beauty of the mountain will never be done
Mountains Poem
By Nicholas Robinson
The large Bastian of stone goes above the sky
Its mighty face the colour of steel
Its perilous height will make any man shake
The clouds covering its peak like a grey thundering curtain
The jagged face by the look of a dragon
Steps of stone run up the side, if formed by giants
An eerie green glow emanates from the inside the rock
The smell of rain fills the air
The wet rocks gleam in the little light
As the sun glowed through the cracks
While
The mountain stands
The clouds stay
The rain falls
And the rocks gleam
So the mountain stays
wow those poems are so beautiful i feel like i'm asleep right now! :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent work Gabby and Nicholas! You little poets!!
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